In my city smoking is banned almost anywhere. Since last year is banned smoking in all the bars or restaurants, but bigger restaurants have a section where is not forbidden. Is banned in all the public sites and kids under eighteen can’t buy cigarettes. This law is very good because smoke is very bad for your health and the health of yours and stopping to smoke it reduce the cancer and the mortality. Some people say that the smoking law is ridiculous, but it’s because they don’t understand that is for their health. At the moment the police are not being very severe, and I think that is a theme very important.
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Your opinion paragraph is really good. I have made some corrections. Have a look at them:
In my city smoking is banned almost anywhere. Since last year smoking is banned in all the bars or restaurants, but bigger restaurants have a section where smoking is not forbidden. Smoking Is banned in all the public sites such as hospitals, cinemas, ... and kids under eighteen can’t buy cigarettes. This law is very good because smoking is very bad for our health and stop smoking will reduce the cancer cases and the mortality. Some people say that the smoking law is ridiculous, but it’s because they don’t understand that is for their health. At the moment the police are not very severe, and I think that this theme is very important.
Well-done, Carles.
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